Now look at this second, more elaborate thesis statement: Here the general claim about social media has been made more specific as you have introduced particular examples of social media and occasions when these media proved to be significant.
You have given your readers a clearer picture of what the essay will be about.
Both as a student and as a professional, you may be asked to examine complicated situations and to develop and support positions that reflect the complexity of the issues involved.
For example, if you go into education, you may be asked to develop and support a recommendation for a remedial reading program based upon a careful analysis of the costs and impacts of competing proposals.
Alternately, you could divide the body of the essay into two main sections—one for Egypt and the other for the United States—and then subdivide by Twitter, Facebook, and You Tube.
The resulting outline would look like this: Either of these outlines would be a clear progression from the thesis statement and would help the reader to see how each key idea furthers the main claim.
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The model is now the cheapest electric vehicle (EV) on the market, yet it’s still hard to imagine many drivers excitedly running out to buy one.
(Tuttle, 2013)In his disproportionate praise of the six-month agreement with Iran, Barack Obama said: “For the first time in nearly a decade, we have halted progress of the Iranian nuclear program.” But if the program, now several decades old, had really been “halted” shortly after U. forces invaded neighboring Iraq, we would not be desperately pursuing agreements to stop it now, as about 10,000 centrifuges spin to enrich uranium.